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Fly a Kite in the Dry Wind...
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Quote:Will you fly, o kite...
Will you fly in this wind?
Soar above to see the world of man, for me...
Down to this earth I'm pinned.
Then come back to me, o kite...
Return to me from where you sail
Tell me what you've seen of this world of man
As I wait for you in this broken jail...
I will guide you, o kite...
I will tell you what all to see
So rise with the wind, above this world of man
I hold this string that binds you and me...
Will you fly away, o kite...
Will you wish to fly away to be free?
A melancholy rise, bound to this world of man
Can you hear this worldly cry of plea?
And so, will you fly, o kite...
On a string, fly in this dry wind?
I am pinned to this earth, the world of man..
A world of man that sinned...
Comments?
 About this As you know in the previous thread, this is a dark world. The poem should shed a little light on it. I finally found out that I could not complete it earlier due to the fact that some settings in PS were not good...
(This post was last modified: 02/12/2009 01:53 AM by feinicks.)
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RE: Fly a Kite in the Dry Wind...
Is that your poem??? Its really really good
Wall is good, but i don't have any monitors with that res :(
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RE: Fly a Kite in the Dry Wind...
TLDR for the poem, but the wallpaper have improved alot. :P
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feinicks
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RE: Fly a Kite in the Dry Wind...
roberth Wrote:Is that your poem??? Its really really good
Wall is good, but i don't have any monitors with that res :(
Yea... I wrote it after I saw a kite flying outside a broken building. The Image was inspired from there.
Its not supposed to be a Wall...lol... just a LP.
Heartless141 Wrote:TLDR for the poem, but the wallpaper have improved alot. :P
Thanks...
Also, the poem ain't that long.
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RE: Fly a Kite in the Dry Wind...
good wall... but is that really the full quality wall/LP? Seems too rough, IMO, and the scene doesn't seem legitimate enough for me to actually use.
However its much better than most people can do and with that excellent poem, I can see you have a proper concept in your head.
Keep at it fein, you're doing good.
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RE: Fly a Kite in the Dry Wind...
feinicks Wrote:roberth Wrote:Is that your poem??? Its really really good
Wall is good, but i don't have any monitors with that res :(
Yea... I wrote it after I saw a kite flying outside a broken building. The Image was inspired from there.
Its not supposed to be a Wall...lol... just a LP.
It looked like a wall to me  my bad
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feinicks
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RE: Fly a Kite in the Dry Wind...
lol... I have kept it rough looking to demonstrate a "bad camera" that introduces a lot of grain...
If you want to use it as a wall, I'll reduce noise and increase its size...
Thanks for positive feedback!
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RE: Fly a Kite in the Dry Wind...
feinicks Wrote:No more comments?
I know where you're avatar is from! mike inel
(needs better resolution before I give  )
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RE: Fly a Kite in the Dry Wind...
aspheric Wrote:feinicks Wrote:No more comments?
I know where you're avatar is from! mike inel
(needs better resolution before I give )
Which avy? The current one? Found it at DA. The previous one (which trademark has now), I found somewhere I do not remember...
About the resolution: You want me to increase its resolution?
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