Endless Paradigm

Quote:Will you fly, o kite...
Will you fly in this wind?
Soar above to see the world of man, for me...
Down to this earth I'm pinned.
Then come back to me, o kite...
Return to me from where you sail
Tell me what you've seen of this world of man
As I wait for you in this broken jail...
I will guide you, o kite...
I will tell you what all to see
So rise with the wind, above this world of man
I hold this string that binds you and me...
Will you fly away, o kite...
Will you wish to fly away to be free?
A melancholy rise, bound to this world of man
Can you hear this worldly cry of plea?
And so, will you fly, o kite...
On a string, fly in this dry wind?
I am pinned to this earth, the world of man..
A world of man that sinned...

Comments?

Is that your poem??? Its really really good

Wall is good, but i don't have any monitors with that res :(

TLDR for the poem, but the wallpaper have improved alot. :P

roberth Wrote:Is that your poem??? Its really really good

Wall is good, but i don't have any monitors with that res :(

Yea... I wrote it after I saw a kite flying outside a broken building. The Image was inspired from there.

Its not supposed to be a Wall...lol... just a LP.

Heartless141 Wrote:TLDR for the poem, but the wallpaper have improved alot. :P

Thanks...

Also, the poem ain't that long.

good wall... but is that really the full quality wall/LP? Seems too rough, IMO, and the scene doesn't seem legitimate enough for me to actually use.

However its much better than most people can do and with that excellent poem, I can see you have a proper concept in your head.

Keep at it fein, you're doing good.

feinicks Wrote:

roberth Wrote:Is that your poem??? Its really really good

Wall is good, but i don't have any monitors with that res :(

Yea... I wrote it after I saw a kite flying outside a broken building. The Image was inspired from there.

Its not supposed to be a Wall...lol... just a LP.

It looked like a wall to me my bad

lol... I have kept it rough looking to demonstrate a "bad camera" that introduces a lot of grain...

If you want to use it as a wall, I'll reduce noise and increase its size...

Thanks for positive feedback!

No more comments?

feinicks Wrote:No more comments?

I know where you're avatar is from! mike inel

(needs better resolution before I give )

aspheric Wrote:

feinicks Wrote:No more comments?

I know where you're avatar is from! mike inel

(needs better resolution before I give )

Which avy? The current one? Found it at DA. The previous one (which trademark has now), I found somewhere I do not remember...

About the resolution: You want me to increase its resolution?