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feinicks · 06/09/2008 09:42 AM

my attempt @ abstract..

please comment... (and criticise only if you have something constructive to say)

v2

Mickey · 06/09/2008 09:46 AM

YAYZ small!!! I likez it except for the little sprays of color. The colors go well together, great job Madwin

feinicks · 06/09/2008 09:53 AM

arigatou

hmm..

I'll edit the image to contain no spray.. lets c.

PSPkiller · 06/09/2008 09:55 AM

i leiks, although maybe you could soften the colour spray and the jaggeddy bit a little. just so it looks a little less pixelated. only a tiny bit though because you want to keep the jaggedy-ness (real word? i think not...)

Pyro · 06/09/2008 09:59 AM

I agree with Mickey, I'm not too fond of the splatters, i think you could reduce them a bit.
Also, it seems a little oversharpened. Try adding some gentle shadows in the background too.

feinicks · 07/09/2008 10:04 AM

added a v2... please comment now!

thanks for the above replies!

1-R · 07/09/2008 02:53 PM

I like it. Nice job.

roberth · 07/09/2008 03:50 PM

yeah. V2=Much better, those splashes didnt work

S7* · 07/09/2008 03:52 PM

colour win.

feinicks · 07/09/2008 07:48 PM

thks for the comments!

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