Endless Paradigm

my attempt @ abstract..

please comment... (and criticise only if you have something constructive to say)

v2

YAYZ small!!! I likez it except for the little sprays of color. The colors go well together, great job

arigatou

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hmm..

I'll edit the image to contain no spray.. lets c.

i leiks,  although maybe you could soften the colour spray and the jaggeddy bit a little. just so it looks a little less  pixelated. only a tiny bit though because you  want to keep the jaggedy-ness (real word? i think not...)

I agree with Mickey, I'm not too fond of the splatters, i think you could reduce them a bit.
Also, it seems a little oversharpened. Try adding some gentle shadows in the background too.

added a v2... please comment now!

thanks for the above replies!

I like it. Nice job.

yeah. V2=Much better, those splashes didnt work

colour win.

thks for the comments!