I think the vocals are acceptable, or maybe a bit too high.  The main issue is that your recording seems to have caught some breaths or similar (or did you apply a normalisation/dynamic-range compression filter?), because the music has parts where it suddenly fades out and back in again.  Then again, you said it has some touchups that need to be done, so that'll probably fix it.

Otherwise, not bad at all, as said above :)