trademark91 Wrote:THAT WAS EPIC!!!!

Thanks, that's what I was going for.

ZiNgA BuRgA Wrote:

theEvilOne Wrote:On another note, I've been getting some help with a couple of sentences in this chapter from some professionals over at dash-hacks, making this chapter far superior than the rest of my old work.

Pros at dash-hacks?  Who?
Nosferatu Zodd is probably the only person who has something - his writing is okay I guess, but can certainly use a bit of improvement.  He does have good creativity however.

The internet, by nature, isn't really a good source for English advice, but can help a bit I guess.  Sucking up to the English teacher probably works better (if you can actually do that).  Eh, up to you.

Well the professionals part was a little sarcastic, but these guys have helped me understand a lot about sentence structuring and semi-colon use. They may not be professionals but they're better than me.