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Is it bad that while I'm working on a new chapter for my book, I write this sentence: "“What?” he suddenly asked aloud, moar a groan than anything, and sprang up in bed."

I feel so ashamed.
If
You're a better write than me, that's for sure.
yeah. you got me beat.
trademark91 Wrote:yeah. you got me beat.

You want to see new chapter when I'm done?
for sure.
trademark91 Wrote:for sure.

Alright, give me a few days. Maybe a week, depending on if I decide to play video games instead of writing. I also have another essay due Monday, planning on doing it tomorrow or Saturday.
theEvilOne Wrote:
trademark91 Wrote:for sure.

Alright, give me a few days. Maybe a week, depending on if I decide to play video games instead of writing. I also have another essay due Monday, planning on doing it tomorrow or Saturday.

sounds like a plan
It's your book, you can put any form of spellings/grammar/styles/etc in there, if you believe it to enhance the nature of your writing.

Unless this is actually for school...
ZiNgA BuRgA Wrote:It's your book, you can put any form of spellings/grammar/styles/etc in there, if you believe it to enhance the nature of your writing.

Unless this is actually for school...

No, it's not for school, but if I want it to be published I don't think "moar" would be acceptable.
If it doesn't actually add anything, or help with the mood of the story, then you're correct - better off using standard spelling.
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