theEvilOne Wrote:On another note, I've been getting some help with a couple of sentences in this chapter from some professionals over at dash-hacks, making this chapter far superior than the rest of my old work.

Pros at dash-hacks?  Who?
Nosferatu Zodd is probably the only person who has something - his writing is okay I guess, but can certainly use a bit of improvement.  He does have good creativity however.

The internet, by nature, isn't really a good source for English advice, but can help a bit I guess.  Sucking up to the English teacher probably works better (if you can actually do that).  Eh, up to you.

(This post was last modified: 23/10/2009 03:03 AM by ZiNgA BuRgA.)