theEvilOne
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RE: My writing is declining
ZiNgA BuRgA Wrote:If it doesn't actually add anything, or help with the mood of the story, then you're correct - better off using standard spelling.
No, it wasn't dialogue or anything, it was just a descriptive sentence I guess.
On another note, I've been getting some help with a couple of sentences in this chapter from some professionals over at dash-hacks, making this chapter far superior than the rest of my old work. Now I have to go back and find all my careless mistakes, and that's going to take forever.
tl;dr: My book has way too many grammatical/sentence structure errors, so I need to go back and fix everything.
The good news: this chapter may just blow your goddamn mind, it's certainly blown mine already and it's only halfway done (maybe).
My Daleks, just understand this; if you choose death and destruction, then death and destruction will choose you.
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22/10/2009 09:02 PM |
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