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RE: My writing is declining
ZiNgA BuRgA Wrote:If it doesn't actually add anything, or help with the mood of the story, then you're correct - better off using standard spelling.

No, it wasn't dialogue or anything, it was just a descriptive sentence I guess.

On another note, I've been getting some help with a couple of sentences in this chapter from some professionals over at dash-hacks, making this chapter far superior than the rest of my old work. Now I have to go back and find all my careless mistakes, and that's going to take forever.

tl;dr: My book has way too many grammatical/sentence structure errors, so I need to go back and fix everything.

The good news: this chapter may just blow your goddamn mind, it's certainly blown mine already and it's only halfway done (maybe).

My Daleks, just understand this; if you choose death and destruction, then death and destruction will choose you.
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22/10/2009 09:02 PM
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My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 22/10/2009, 06:37 PM
RE: My writing is declining - lembas - 22/10/2009, 06:39 PM
RE: My writing is declining - trademark91 - 22/10/2009, 06:40 PM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 22/10/2009, 06:49 PM
RE: My writing is declining - trademark91 - 22/10/2009, 07:03 PM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 22/10/2009, 07:06 PM
RE: My writing is declining - trademark91 - 22/10/2009, 07:09 PM
RE: My writing is declining - ZiNgA BuRgA - 22/10/2009, 08:36 PM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 22/10/2009, 08:39 PM
RE: My writing is declining - ZiNgA BuRgA - 22/10/2009, 08:48 PM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 22/10/2009 09:02 PM
RE: My writing is declining - Hellgiver - 22/10/2009, 09:15 PM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 22/10/2009, 09:19 PM
RE: My writing is declining - trademark91 - 22/10/2009, 09:20 PM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 22/10/2009, 09:23 PM
RE: My writing is declining - Hellgiver - 22/10/2009, 09:22 PM
RE: My writing is declining - Hellgiver - 22/10/2009, 09:27 PM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 22/10/2009, 09:37 PM
RE: My writing is declining - trademark91 - 22/10/2009, 10:02 PM
RE: My writing is declining - ZiNgA BuRgA - 23/10/2009, 03:02 AM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 23/10/2009, 07:39 AM
RE: My writing is declining - Hellgiver - 23/10/2009, 04:13 PM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 23/10/2009, 04:26 PM
RE: My writing is declining - ZiNgA BuRgA - 23/10/2009, 07:02 PM
RE: My writing is declining - theEvilOne - 23/10/2009, 07:25 PM

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