Mc Cabe Wrote:the light doesn't make sense :/

the way you have light on the left side of each letter suggests the lighting is above the letters which means that the black on the right wouldn't be completely black,..would be greyish,...

Otherwise if the light was at the same level as the letters tere would be light on the first letter and the rest in shadow,.

I dunno :S

how about now?

Senseito URΩBΩROS Wrote:Yeah it seems quite squint, the lighting needs to be more central and focused.

The actual words are too far to the left.

I like the pattern on REFLECT, but the Font on FEIN ART is pretty ugly.

Actually, I'm not uploading the entire image. This is just a crop. So maybe that is why it looks as such. Hmm.. Guess I'll change the font... dunno... I'm thinking of adding an embedded pattern there.

Nacos Wrote:fein art double you tee eff.......

read the 1st post.

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curses to Photobucket... I forgot they resize large images on free accounts...