Endless Paradigm

Been trying to get a metallic feel to this ... text thingy on a metal like background. Its not complete in my eye yet, and so wanted to get a third person opinion from Voidians. All constructive critic and suggestions are gratefully accepted! All lewd/ destructive critic and remarks are rolled up and shoved up the unmentionable.

I'd appreciate it if your comments include obsevations on:
*the Perspective
*the Renders metallic look and feel
*lighting effects and relfections
*the background
*any random remark from your side

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Reflect v2

Needs to be more central... the background texture is too blatent, needs to have better blending.

Plus you saved it in Low Quality JPG, save it in PNG from now on.

Senseito URΩBΩROS Wrote:Needs to be more central... the background texture is too blatent, needs to have better blending.

okay.. what about the characters? apart from the central thing..

Senseito URΩBΩROS Wrote:Plus you saved it in Low Quality JPG, save it in PNG from now on.

Oh... didn't realise it! lol... thanks for the heads up!

the light doesn't make sense :/

the way you have light on the left side of each letter suggests the lighting is above the letters which means that the black on the right wouldn't be completely black,..would be greyish,...

Otherwise if the light was at the same level as the letters tere would be light on the first letter and the rest in shadow,.

I dunno :S

Mc Cabe Wrote:the light doesn't make sense :/

the way you have light on the left side of each letter suggests the lighting is above the letters which means that the black on the right wouldn't be completely black,..would be greyish,...

Otherwise if the light was at the same level as the letters tere would be light on the first letter and the rest in shadow,.

I dunno :S

Yeah it seems quite squint, the lighting needs to be more central and focused.

The actual words are too far to the left.

I like the pattern on REFLECT, but the Font on FEIN ART is pretty ugly.

fein art double you tee eff.......

Mc Cabe Wrote:the light doesn't make sense :/

the way you have light on the left side of each letter suggests the lighting is above the letters which means that the black on the right wouldn't be completely black,..would be greyish,...

Otherwise if the light was at the same level as the letters tere would be light on the first letter and the rest in shadow,.

I dunno :S

how about now?

Senseito URΩBΩROS Wrote:Yeah it seems quite squint, the lighting needs to be more central and focused.

The actual words are too far to the left.

I like the pattern on REFLECT, but the Font on FEIN ART is pretty ugly.

Actually, I'm not uploading the entire image. This is just a crop. So maybe that is why it looks as such. Hmm.. Guess I'll change the font... dunno... I'm thinking of adding an embedded pattern there.

Nacos Wrote:fein art double you tee eff.......

read the 1st post.

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curses to Photobucket... I forgot they resize large images on free accounts...

feinicks Wrote:

Nacos Wrote:fein art double you tee eff.......

read the 1st post.

you read the 1st post ...

I'd appreciate it if your comments include obsevations on:
*any random remark from your side

I really don't feel the fein art text :/

also I think that there needs to be more going on in the background.

i think the reflect thingy needs moar shadows...

just doesn't look like it belongs there

also. its weird to see times new roman engraved to metal .. lol

but that's just me