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Slushba132
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RE: my first vector
semi-good, the eyebrows need more work...
If you are using flash turn the lines down to hairline...
also there is a line on part of his hair that is thicker than the rest
you're also missing the top part of the blade guard, the blade itself looks really nice though, but once again, no grip
ear could use more detail and the red on the edges isn't their missing shading on skin around neck and face...

Not bad for a first but it seems like you just got lazy and didn't want to finish. You easily could have put in a little more time and made it look more like the stock.

Unless you are trying to make it more original and then this is pretty good.

(This post was last modified: 05/07/2008 10:22 PM by Slushba132.)
05/07/2008 10:19 PM
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my first vector - hellobonacua - 05/07/2008, 10:03 PM
RE: my first vector - Slushba132 - 05/07/2008 10:19 PM
RE: my first vector - Tetris999 - 05/07/2008, 10:27 PM
RE: my first vector - Slushba132 - 05/07/2008, 10:29 PM
RE: my first vector - Tetris999 - 05/07/2008, 11:13 PM
RE: my first vector - S7* - 06/07/2008, 12:27 AM
RE: my first vector - xBu - 06/07/2008, 12:45 PM

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