05/07/2008, 10:03 PM
05/07/2008, 10:19 PM
semi-good, the eyebrows need more work...
If you are using flash turn the lines down to hairline...
also there is a line on part of his hair that is thicker than the rest
you're also missing the top part of the blade guard, the blade itself looks really nice though, but once again, no grip
ear could use more detail and the red on the edges isn't their missing shading on skin around neck and face...
Not bad for a first but it seems like you just got lazy and didn't want to finish. You easily could have put in a little more time and made it look more like the stock.
Unless you are trying to make it more original and then this is pretty good.
If you are using flash turn the lines down to hairline...
also there is a line on part of his hair that is thicker than the rest
you're also missing the top part of the blade guard, the blade itself looks really nice though, but once again, no grip
ear could use more detail and the red on the edges isn't their missing shading on skin around neck and face...
Not bad for a first but it seems like you just got lazy and didn't want to finish. You easily could have put in a little more time and made it look more like the stock.
Unless you are trying to make it more original and then this is pretty good.
05/07/2008, 10:27 PM
lol, his eyes make me laugh for some reason
but pretty nice anyway
but pretty nice anyway
05/07/2008, 10:29 PM
Me too, I think they are messed but I can't really vector eyes in flash either so I can't really complain
05/07/2008, 11:13 PM
Slushba132 Wrote:Me too, I think they are messed but I can't really vector eyes in flash either so I can't really complain
neither can i, eyes are so hard to vector
06/07/2008, 12:27 AM
fix the bottom shadow colour, add the red in the back, and fix the eye/eyebrows area - and isn't there are piece missing on the sword bit between the handle and the blade? the bit on the top.
Nevertheless, great job, I'd like to see it size boosted as well.
Nevertheless, great job, I'd like to see it size boosted as well.
06/07/2008, 12:45 PM
Great for a first.
Look good, nice job.
Look good, nice job.