Kaiser
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RE: [VOTING] Azumi vs Exbu
Azumi Wrote:please give me some critsim as to what wrong with mine? i just want to know!! i try to be kinda unique so is it too much?? i know it was said that it stands out too much.. how? too big? gimme some c&c cause i don't feel like making a thread for it
Well... I havent seen that anime to see how it suits the tech style I see you did for the sig
its quite impressive that you drawn most of the sig, but... the sig is too big, having that in your sig here in ep would cause you to scroll up and down to fully see it, which would kill it... the text shadows makes it difficult to read it, specially since the font itself is a rather difficult one to look at, also the text color (which is pretty bright) on a white background makes no contrast...
the render would look better if you blend it a bit, you could have put segments of the honeybee pattern over her and that would have done some depth, which is also missing.
The sig looks good, but it could have been better imho...
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19/06/2008 07:45 AM |
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