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To fly a Kite in the Dry winds... LP
OK... so I continued working on it and have taken it up to about 80-90 % complete, I think....

here:
[Image: FlyaKiteintheDrywind.png]

Maybe a little work on shadows? Any other comments?


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I'd like some comments and critiques on this please!

[Image: ToFlyaKiteintheDrywind.png]


I feel like something is missing, but can't pinpoint it... but well.. I did choose a theme like that..

Still have to work on: Blending needs a little work
The pipe in left corner needs work.
But anything else???


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26/07/2009 08:18 PM
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lighting would be a start .. imo

everything is just tooo dark :D
26/07/2009 10:23 PM
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RE: To fly a Kite in the Dry winds... LP
hmmm the building say the sun ison the left, but something is shiny in the behind the sand mountain and clouds.
and the sands look abit fake?

oh, and adding something on the sand like skeleton/ bricks should make it better
impressive, nonetheless
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RE: To fly a Kite in the Dry winds... LP
boogschd Wrote:lighting would be a start .. imo

everything is just tooo dark :D
Its intended to be dark.. but yea.. will work on the lighting...

Heartless141 Wrote:hmmm the building say the sun ison the left, but something is shiny in the behind the sand mountain and clouds.
and the sands look abit fake?

oh, and adding something on the sand like skeleton/ bricks should make it better
impressive, nonetheless

hmmmm...
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27/07/2009 12:18 AM
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Yeh it needs to be blended together much more, especially the city

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27/07/2009 07:21 AM
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I don't know exactly what I'm looking at but I really like it.
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27/07/2009 07:28 AM
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dark, much too dark to understand it... sorry feinicks
27/07/2009 11:12 AM
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Can't really see much...

Especially since my monitor is set pretty dark too...
27/07/2009 03:24 PM
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I still have to work on the lighting... that image essentially shows the basic elements.

But yeah... its going to be dark.
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27/07/2009 08:04 PM
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RE: To fly a Kite in the Dry winds... LP
k... worked on it a little more... added some stuff and lighting and worked on shadows....


Comments? Does it feel near completion? I say its about 80-90 % done.

Its supposed to be dark, so try to see it as such. Any more suggestions?
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29/07/2009 09:26 AM
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