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feinicks

26/07/2009, 08:18 PM
OK... so I continued working on it and have taken it up to about 80-90 % complete, I think....

here:
[Image: FlyaKiteintheDrywind.png]

Maybe a little work on shadows? Any other comments?


Spoiler for old stuff:
I'd like some comments and critiques on this please!

[Image: ToFlyaKiteintheDrywind.png]


I feel like something is missing, but can't pinpoint it... but well.. I did choose a theme like that..

Still have to work on: Blending needs a little work
The pipe in left corner needs work.
But anything else???

boogschd

26/07/2009, 10:23 PM
lighting would be a start .. imo

everything is just tooo dark :D

Kana

26/07/2009, 10:36 PM
hmmm the building say the sun ison the left, but something is shiny in the behind the sand mountain and clouds.
and the sands look abit fake?

oh, and adding something on the sand like skeleton/ bricks should make it better
impressive, nonetheless

feinicks

27/07/2009, 12:18 AM
boogschd Wrote:lighting would be a start .. imo

everything is just tooo dark :D
Its intended to be dark.. but yea.. will work on the lighting...

Heartless141 Wrote:hmmm the building say the sun ison the left, but something is shiny in the behind the sand mountain and clouds.
and the sands look abit fake?

oh, and adding something on the sand like skeleton/ bricks should make it better
impressive, nonetheless

hmmmm...

Method

27/07/2009, 07:21 AM
Yeh it needs to be blended together much more, especially the city

Joom

27/07/2009, 07:28 AM
I don't know exactly what I'm looking at but I really like it.

S7*

27/07/2009, 11:12 AM
dark, much too dark to understand it... sorry feinicks

Assassinator

27/07/2009, 03:24 PM
Can't really see much...

Especially since my monitor is set pretty dark too...

feinicks

27/07/2009, 08:04 PM
I still have to work on the lighting... that image essentially shows the basic elements.

But yeah... its going to be dark.

feinicks

29/07/2009, 09:26 AM
k... worked on it a little more... added some stuff and lighting and worked on shadows....


Comments? Does it feel near completion? I say its about 80-90 % done.

Its supposed to be dark, so try to see it as such. Any more suggestions?
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