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hellobonacua · 05/07/2008 10:03 PM

after working for 3 days its finally finished yeah

here's the stock photo

[Image: 347d1n5.png]

here's the vector

[Image: 2luop6f.png]

enjoy

Slushba132 · 05/07/2008 10:19 PM

semi-good, the eyebrows need more work...
If you are using flash turn the lines down to hairline...
also there is a line on part of his hair that is thicker than the rest
you're also missing the top part of the blade guard, the blade itself looks really nice though, but once again, no grip
ear could use more detail and the red on the edges isn't their missing shading on skin around neck and face...

Not bad for a first but it seems like you just got lazy and didn't want to finish. You easily could have put in a little more time and made it look more like the stock.

Unless you are trying to make it more original and then this is pretty good.

Tetris999 · 05/07/2008 10:27 PM

lol, his eyes make me laugh for some reason

but pretty nice anyway

Slushba132 · 05/07/2008 10:29 PM

Me too, I think they are messed but I can't really vector eyes in flash either so I can't really complain

Tetris999 · 05/07/2008 11:13 PM

Slushba132 Wrote:Me too, I think they are messed but I can't really vector eyes in flash either so I can't really complain

neither can i, eyes are so hard to vector Sadist

S7* · 06/07/2008 12:27 AM

fix the bottom shadow colour, add the red in the back, and fix the eye/eyebrows area - and isn't there are piece missing on the sword bit between the handle and the blade? the bit on the top.

Nevertheless, great job, I'd like to see it size boosted as well.

xBu · 06/07/2008 12:45 PM

Great for a first.
Look good, nice job.

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