The second one is made of wiiiin.

heh thanks guys :3

dunno hmmm i relied on the noise and that flare to make the main render stood out.
but hmmm may be i can try an outlining.

let's try a less heavy noise.

Maybe use a bit of blur to help with focal? :) Nice though! Love the colour scheme :)

thanks method.
hmmm blur... it would make the outlines between the colorblocks go to waste though. i think? =O

The signature is quite large, making it look rather cumbersome. A size around 500x180 or 400x160 is usually what i use, this signature is pretty wide, making for a lot of space.

As for the colours, they're very good and very well chosen, unlike some signatures which use vivid purple, cyan or green shades. It feels like a welcome departure from the usual obviously brush-based signatures of the norm. the render of miku fits perfectly and you get a nice impression somebody could've actually painted it.

I think the border also, could be simplified. Without the triangles it wouldn't impose on the style of the contents anymore. I would recommend making the text smaller and using a more traditional font, in keeping with the style of a "a painting".

Very good heartless, i like it.

(17/07/2011 05:55 PM)Kana Wrote:  dunno hmmm i relied on the noise and that flare to make the main render stood out.
but hmmm may be i can try an outlining.

let's try a less heavy noise.

removed the triangles in my latest revision.
also made the noise less heavy. :)