not a 4 koma this time though
Critic please, "nice work", "good job" arnt gonna help me improve xD


didn't have anything in  mind this time around, just throw out whatever i feel nice.
don't even have a name for it yet. wanted to do one with "Liar's world". but no dice i suppose

U made this?
Awesome:)

Hmm, It's certainly a unique piece from what I've seen here so far. But all the...noise(?) in the picture doesn't work. It just doesn't work for me, but don't let that put you down, because I'm sure you can create some fantastic work. Maybe if you reduced the noise, it wouldn't be so....harsh? Sorry if this is like beating you with a blunt butter knife, this is just my opinion afterall.~

no i appreciate those :D thanks. lemme try something else instead of noises.

thanks you to gucci :P

well this is it without the noises

kindda losing the contrast for the main sprite, so I'm thinking of something.
might as well replace the stars with something else less random as well.

It's a good improvement, for me, blends together a bit nicer now. Did you draw the sprite yourself? I don't know if you've used them in this but you could experiment with some colour/contrast tweaking (or whatever they are called) layers. see what the others say

Looks good, It's just a bit all over the place, y'know?

And it looks better without the noise IMO. :L

Overall, nice work, must have taken you quite a bit of time and you must have used a lot of layers.

:D

i have one thing to say.

Excellent.

(16/07/2011 09:46 AM)Kana Wrote:  no i appreciate those :D thanks. lemme try something else instead of noises.

thanks you to gucci :P

well this is it without the noises

kindda losing the contrast for the main sprite, so I'm thinking of something.
might as well replace the stars with something else less random as well.

You're welcome:)

It's  hard to understand the content of the image. You used to much brush mixing, I only see a face and a hand.
The rest i don't get what is it. Keep it up, and you'll do better.

it's one of the point of the sig, :) i don't usually like normal abstract works if you know my other works.
just woke up, have something in mind now. gonna try it.