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[Sig] Optimus
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Read these please, esp. the Special notes...
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this was originally intended to be an entry in the SOTW, but I decided not to and reworked it.

Artist's Comments
I would like some constructive criticism from the exp. gfxer. Please to comment on Depth.. I tried to integrate a lot of it.

Special Notes
Looks awesome with black background, so view with a darker theme


cnc!

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04/07/2008 08:34 PM
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RE: [Sig] Optimus
There is a lot of focused and unfocused objects here.

like the transformers symbol draws out my attention to the render(which is the main part of your sig)

and i really don't like the image split in two because there is more on the right than there is on the left image.(usually multiple sigs in one never works out)

the text is bleh don't like where it is.

The render seems to be away from the background, it seems that it doesn't belong.

I don't like this. P:



srry for harsh criticism. ^^'

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RE: [Sig] Optimus
thanks for your c n c.. i will see what can be done about that..

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04/07/2008 08:40 PM
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RE: [Sig] Optimus
Generation 1 or get the fudge out.
Otherwise, its good, just need to have a real central focus.  The eyes wander around the whole sig too much.

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04/07/2008 09:56 PM
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RE: [Sig] Optimus
I think it's a nice sig , I just don't like the fact that the transformers logo is split.

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04/07/2008 10:10 PM
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RE: [Sig] Optimus
I like it but I suggest that the split shouldn't be very big at all.

You got some nice effects in there though!!! :D


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05/07/2008 03:07 AM
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RE: [Sig] Optimus
yeah, essentially, the concept is great.

Fix the gap, redo the text i.e. different font because that looks awful with the signature, and rework the background
05/07/2008 03:14 AM
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completely rubbish... hmmm I need a new apprentice...

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Nacos Wrote:completely rubbish... hmmm I need a new apprentice...

tsk.tsk, state your reasoning.
05/07/2008 05:51 AM
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RE: [Sig] Optimus
backgorund, stock, layout, colours, blending, focus, text.. all comepletely suck.. (reason by the way)

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