yeah so my rough draft is looking just like an outline i woke up got clean then played god of war II all morning and barely started on my essay this is what i have so far:

General Layout: AXES, Persuasive, 5 Paragraphs.
Intro Layout:

Quote

Explain

Thesis

Summary
Body Paragraphs Layout:

Argument

eXample

Explain

Summary/So What
Closing Paragraph Layout:

Restate Thesis

Re-Summarize Weakest Point

Re-Summarize Average Point

Re-Summarize Strongest Point
Intro-Focus on peoples reaction to the bad news (no planes)
Thesis- Removal of a feature previously featured in the series will decrease the popularity and quality of the video game.

Fist Body Paragraph-

Second Body Paragraph-Why would it affect real-world

Third Body Paragraph-What is positive about the feature

Conclusion Paragraph


please feel free to put in ideas of change some things

(This post was last modified: 16/04/2007 06:05 PM by beaner2k6.)

^^ lol

go beaner!

CupCakes

now im at school bored again

aww pic dosnt show

(This post was last modified: 16/04/2007 07:46 PM by ix_stylez.)

uhuh

now i want to see that pic i wonder what its of...

its a fractal