Congratulations on finishing it!  It's definitely a technically challenging piece and you've done well.

I'd say that timing is rather strict for this piece, so I would suggest trying it with a metronome to ensure that you're on the beat.  This will also help you identify problem areas (including pauses, or parts where you're a bit uncertain) so that you can focus on them a bit more.
Keeping your notes even and hands together (ie, staying in control) is generally difficult with fast pieces like this and is something I'd pay extra attention to get right.  Perhaps try playing passages slowly, being very critical of yourself maintaining stability, before bringing it up to a faster pace.  Practice of scales/arpeggios/broken chords could be of great help if you're like me and don't like practicing those.

But anyway, you make less mistakes than I recall making when I last played this, so well done.  I'm sure you're already amazing family & friends. :)

(This post was last modified: 06/01/2014 09:30 PM by ZiNgA BuRgA.)