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Desperately need some help
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RE: Desperately need some help
Lol. How about the mice serve him rice balls and wild boar, and something seems familiar
about the wild boar, something homely. In return for the favor he leads the mice against
the cats and defeats all of them, but
just at the moment of victory he feels these awful stabbing needles at his ankles
and is horrified to find himself being attacked by veracious, insane mice. Only
as he falls does he finally realize what had seemed so familiar about the stringy, slightly
undercooked meat. IT SMELT LIKE HIS WIFE'S PERFUME!!!!

EDIT: Meaning he ate his wife, lol.

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And when you gaze long into an abyss,
the abyss gazes also into you.
(This post was last modified: 21/05/2007 05:54 PM by _VEndeTta.)
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Desperately need some help - Chroma - 21/05/2007, 04:09 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - _VEndeTta - 21/05/2007, 04:10 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - YoYoBallz - 21/05/2007, 04:16 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - Chroma - 21/05/2007, 04:20 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - Chroma - 21/05/2007, 04:53 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - _VEndeTta - 21/05/2007 05:53 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - Chroma - 21/05/2007, 06:58 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - _VEndeTta - 21/05/2007, 07:34 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - Chroma - 21/05/2007, 08:16 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - Chroma - 21/05/2007, 09:03 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - _VEndeTta - 21/05/2007, 09:05 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - Chroma - 21/05/2007, 09:09 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - BluDevil - 21/05/2007, 09:40 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - Chroma - 21/05/2007, 10:05 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - dedat - 21/05/2007, 10:13 PM
RE: Desperately need some help - u_c_taker - 22/05/2007, 11:31 AM

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