ProperBritish Wrote:i couldnt think of a way to make the fog not feel so tacked on, of course i can und her solarize effect, but i think its more a matter of tweaking that removing it.

maybe if i tried to solarize the fog?

maybe not, but i have reworked her slightly



angled strokes on her person, to reflect her lack of energy (and therefore, focus), less glow around her, and a subtle jitter on the fog emanating from her. the idea i intended was that she was so weak she is about to disappear.

fog is better. don't do the angled strokes, or at least not as harshly as that, it's hard to make out its Suigintou in the first place - and that voids the idea of your LP. Do, however, keep her darker, not as dark, but not as light as the original. it should be nicely done then. How does a faint glow work on her?