the c4d is bad
the depth needs a lot of work
a mish-mash of effects is annoying
needs a better play of colours.

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for the above comments:
remove the red c4d or blend it better.
create depth by adjusting lighting and playing with sharpen/blur/burn/dodge
the best sigs are the ones that are simple to look at. Effects should focus on details!
too monotonous.