Azumi
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RE: [VOTING] Azumi vs Exbu
Kaiser Wrote:Azumi Wrote:please give me some critsim as to what wrong with mine? i just want to know!! i try to be kinda unique so is it too much?? i know it was said that it stands out too much.. how? too big? gimme some c&c cause i don't feel like making a thread for it
Well... I havent seen that anime to see how it suits the tech style I see you did for the sig
its quite impressive that you drawn most of the sig, but... the sig is too big, having that in your sig here in ep would cause you to scroll up and down to fully see it, which would kill it... the text shadows makes it difficult to read it, specially since the font itself is a rather difficult one to look at, also the text color (which is pretty bright) on a white background makes no contrast...
the render would look better if you blend it a bit, you could have put segments of the honeybee pattern over her and that would have done some depth, which is also missing.
The sig looks good, but it could have been better imho...
THANK YOU!!! that is all i wanted!!! if im losing really bad i just want to know what i can do to improve!!
ok so the honey comb pattern is used alot in the show so that why its there... plus they fly mechs so that where the tech style comes in....
i don't know about the too being big and having to scoll down to see... some people here at EP have like 3-4 different pics in there sig and i don't have to scoll to see their huge sigs lol i have to scoll past like 4 sigs just to read the next post (which is annoying.. you guys should put a limit on sig size period, having a bigger sig then your actual post is a bit ridiculous).. but i do agree with you that it is on the big side for a sig.. would be better suited as a psp wall lol... the bg i made is white and blue cause the anime is called sky girls so there ya go... i agree the text is a little hard to read.. its even harder to read with out the shadow lol but i made it big to compensate which kinda killed it (and i was having a problem finding a font that kinda matched the style and didnt look all robotic or square).... i definitly agree that i should have put the honeycomb pattern over her a bit... shoulda thought of that.... text color... umm.. i don't what i thinking.. i just wanted to make it match and i did lol too well in fact.... again thank you very much.. your the best, Kaiser... at least im still proud of tsuki!!!
(This post was last modified: 19/06/2008 02:20 PM by Azumi.)
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19/06/2008 02:10 PM |
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