17/07/2011, 12:43 AM
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17/07/2011, 01:46 AM
I actually like the first one, good job in putting that together.
HEARTY-CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN~! <3 <3 <3
17/07/2011, 07:31 AM
heh thanks guys :3
17/07/2011, 04:39 PM
lol, very colorful ~_~, maybe make the render stand out a bit more?
And the big white light in the middle could go somewhere else.
And the big white light in the middle could go somewhere else.
17/07/2011, 05:55 PM
dunno hmmm i relied on the noise and that flare to make the main render stood out.
but hmmm may be i can try an outlining.
let's try a less heavy noise.
![[Image: Colorful-2.png]](http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h187/heartless141/Colorful-2.png)
but hmmm may be i can try an outlining.
let's try a less heavy noise.
![[Image: Colorful-2.png]](http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h187/heartless141/Colorful-2.png)
17/07/2011, 06:04 PM
Maybe use a bit of blur to help with focal? :) Nice though! Love the colour scheme :)
17/07/2011, 06:05 PM
thanks method.
hmmm blur... it would make the outlines between the colorblocks go to waste though. i think? =O
hmmm blur... it would make the outlines between the colorblocks go to waste though. i think? =O
18/07/2011, 02:20 AM
The signature is quite large, making it look rather cumbersome. A size around 500x180 or 400x160 is usually what i use, this signature is pretty wide, making for a lot of space.
As for the colours, they're very good and very well chosen, unlike some signatures which use vivid purple, cyan or green shades. It feels like a welcome departure from the usual obviously brush-based signatures of the norm. the render of miku fits perfectly and you get a nice impression somebody could've actually painted it.
I think the border also, could be simplified. Without the triangles it wouldn't impose on the style of the contents anymore. I would recommend making the text smaller and using a more traditional font, in keeping with the style of a "a painting".
Very good heartless, i like it.
As for the colours, they're very good and very well chosen, unlike some signatures which use vivid purple, cyan or green shades. It feels like a welcome departure from the usual obviously brush-based signatures of the norm. the render of miku fits perfectly and you get a nice impression somebody could've actually painted it.
I think the border also, could be simplified. Without the triangles it wouldn't impose on the style of the contents anymore. I would recommend making the text smaller and using a more traditional font, in keeping with the style of a "a painting".
Very good heartless, i like it.
18/07/2011, 08:10 AM
Heartless141 Wrote: [ -> ]dunno hmmm i relied on the noise and that flare to make the main render stood out.
but hmmm may be i can try an outlining.
let's try a less heavy noise.
removed the triangles in my latest revision.
also made the noise less heavy. :)
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