Wow this sucks...now Azumi and I won't be the only ones speaking Japanese....lol

Also I'm pretty sure you are wrong. Desu doesn't mean it is, I am or anything like that, unless it as the end and there is no other verb in the scentence (even then that's still arguable) it's simply used to make the verb you said in its "polite" form. I could be wrong (Azumi would probably know more about it than me) but I am pretty sure I'm not.

There are also a few other errors. I understand your triying to simplify the language so people can speak it but don't.
you will complicate it for them in the end.

It's probably better to just watch anime, japanese tv or move to japan.
The language is so complex that it is better to, instead of converting it to english in your head, scrap english entirely and just start building japanese as a new language into your brain.