beaner2k6 Wrote:yeah so my rough draft is looking just like an outline i woke up got clean then played god of war II all morning and barely started on my essay this is what i have so far: General Layout: AXES, Persuasive, 5 Paragraphs. Intro Layout: Quote Explain Thesis Summary Body Paragraphs Layout: Argument eXample Explain Summary/So What Closing Paragraph Layout: Restate Thesis Re-Summarize Weakest Point Re-Summarize Average Point Re-Summarize Strongest Point Intro-Focus on peoples reaction to the bad news (no planes) Thesis- Removal of a feature previously featured in the series will decrease the popularity and quality of the video game. Fist Body Paragraph- Second Body Paragraph-Why would it affect real-world Third Body Paragraph-What is positive about the feature Conclusion Paragraph please feel free to put in ideas of change some things
