Endless Paradigm

Hey i was learnin to draw anime eyes, and i decided to draw mine in anime style but miserably failed xD but anywho this is wat i came out with:



please give me your criticisms and tell me how i can improve and what ya like about it thanks :D

EDIT THE "PUPIL" IN THE 3RD PIC IS MEANT TO SAY PHOTOSHOP LMAO

you can draw better than me

diego Wrote:you can draw waaay better than me

That Looks Good :) Whenever I Try And Draw Anime I Always Mess Up On The Eyes I Just Suck At Drawing Eyes

Looks good. If you want to improve, just draw everyday lol. Oh, and draw outlines first, helps you know where everything goes.

lol i did draw the outlines first :P

Good Stuff deep... keep working at it ;)

not a criticism or anything because this is good art but a little more detail would be a way to improve what you have done already. i notice you have a lot of detail already but a couple of areas are a little off - however it really depends on what effect your trying to achieve.
anime is totally unrealistic (big round eyes, out of proportion heads etc.) so going for as much detail as possible won't work for anime. i would try and copy an anime picture that you like and try and get it identical then you can try your own version.