Endless Paradigm

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the soundtrack was great, and the filming was really good. the whole thing tied together nicely, however, the guy who played the scout needs to work on believable horror. i just didnt buy that he was either shocked or horrified, or even really upset, and it detracted from the film.
music and rain department sent some chill to my spine :D
some of the stuffs can be improved further, but i really enjoyed it =D
Fell asleep,.. Yawn


sowrry

didn't have audio though,.. Facepalm
Nicely done.  I think the voicemail should've been made clearer and louder if the audience is meant to listen to it.  Personally would've liked events to perhaps move a little faster, or add some more drama to it (more camera movement for example).
Music ties in well.  I found it a little repetitive at the end, but there's not too much happening to really warrant much variation.

Overall, nicely done.
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