29/01/2010, 10:09 PM
After revising my book and having it edited time and time again, I deem this story readable enough for the general public. This is an official unofficial release because it hasn't been edited by a professional (yet), so it's not perfect. Story-wise though, I believe it is practically flawless, as it fully expresses my thoughts and what I've wanted to share with everyone since I first began writing this.
Here's the blurb:
When Alexander Descombs was told that he had cancer, he knew his life would soon end. But his heart is filled with hope when he meets a mysterious man named Gill Fefeona, a dark and peculiar character who knew too much about him and supposedly held the cure that could save his life. Alexander decides to accept this strange man’s help, and when he awakes the next day he is healthier than he had ever been during his old age. But you should never trust a man who knows everything about you when you know absolutely nothing about him—Alex may not be dying anymore, but he has instead returned to his teenage childhood; his sixty year old mind still intact! Now Alexander’s son, Bradley Descombs, must find out why his father has ceased to exist, and the truth about Gill Fefeona as a wake of death and destruction falls about he and what’s left of his family. Tempted into knowing his own fate, Bradley must confront Gill Fefeona and make a choice; not to accept, or to die. Gill Fefeona doesn’t mind what choice his victims make, as long as they make one; each choice brings him additional years to live…but when the Devil's in the details, not everything is as plain as they seem.
Big thanks go out to:
-Silvertie (Great help with editing)
-Trademark91 (Wee all go through tough times, wee're all there with ya man)
-Grey_Ghost (Thanks for the support)
-Pretty much anyone who's read any of the story that I've released so far, getting feedback from you guys is always greatly appreciated (unless you're a pocky
)
P.S: I had to .rar it because the file was too big?! Anyways, if you open it and there are notes and unformatted lines everywhere, you'll have to switch the track changes view to final view.
Enjoy!
-Chris
EDIT: There's a chapter near the end (the newest addition to the book) that in my haste to release the book I've forgotten to give a title, simply leaving it as "New Chapter." For anyone who cares, the chapter is indeed supposed to be titled "Ballad of Revival."
Here's the blurb:
When Alexander Descombs was told that he had cancer, he knew his life would soon end. But his heart is filled with hope when he meets a mysterious man named Gill Fefeona, a dark and peculiar character who knew too much about him and supposedly held the cure that could save his life. Alexander decides to accept this strange man’s help, and when he awakes the next day he is healthier than he had ever been during his old age. But you should never trust a man who knows everything about you when you know absolutely nothing about him—Alex may not be dying anymore, but he has instead returned to his teenage childhood; his sixty year old mind still intact! Now Alexander’s son, Bradley Descombs, must find out why his father has ceased to exist, and the truth about Gill Fefeona as a wake of death and destruction falls about he and what’s left of his family. Tempted into knowing his own fate, Bradley must confront Gill Fefeona and make a choice; not to accept, or to die. Gill Fefeona doesn’t mind what choice his victims make, as long as they make one; each choice brings him additional years to live…but when the Devil's in the details, not everything is as plain as they seem.
Big thanks go out to:
-Silvertie (Great help with editing)
-Trademark91 (Wee all go through tough times, wee're all there with ya man)
-Grey_Ghost (Thanks for the support)
-Pretty much anyone who's read any of the story that I've released so far, getting feedback from you guys is always greatly appreciated (unless you're a pocky
)P.S: I had to .rar it because the file was too big?! Anyways, if you open it and there are notes and unformatted lines everywhere, you'll have to switch the track changes view to final view.
Enjoy!
-Chris
EDIT: There's a chapter near the end (the newest addition to the book) that in my haste to release the book I've forgotten to give a title, simply leaving it as "New Chapter." For anyone who cares, the chapter is indeed supposed to be titled "Ballad of Revival."
