Probably vary it a bit more. The second part gets really repetitive. Eg simply stopping some of the instruments somewhere can have a fair bit of an impact.
Otherwise, quite creative :P
Thanks Zinga :) I took on board what you said and tried to implement it....it proooobably didn't really work well :S
Wow , impressive ..... 0.0
Mp3 ? please!
Edit : i think if you giude the melody with a bass guitar , that might fill the space left.