Endless Paradigm

make up for yesterday, yeh?
CC please :P

yay yay yay!

Though, it seems harshly rendered.. Magic Wand?

Use modest blur to fix the hair, OR use 1px brushes to repair.

The particles on the left are a bit too harsh, while the ones on the left look like 'stardust' which I'm guessing is the desired effect.

Either reattempt with Outer Glow or Soft Brushes with scatter.

White, transluscent borders top and below would add a nice touch as well~

sometimes improvision is not a good idea i suppose.

was going to re...get the render, and use pentool instead.
but goddamn render's source went on a maintenance,

Heartless141 Wrote:

sometimes improvision is not a good idea i suppose.

was going to re...get the render, and use pentool instead.
but goddamn render's source went on a maintenance,

significant improvement., get rid of the pink on the right girls collarbone (left), and yes, a re-render is a good idea if you can.

Nice work Heartless.

Senseito7 Wrote:

Heartless141 Wrote:

sometimes improvision is not a good idea i suppose.

was going to re...get the render, and use pentool instead.
but goddamn render's source went on a maintenance,

significant improvement., get rid of the pink on the right girls collarbone (left), and yes, a re-render is a good idea if you can.

Nice work Heartless.

Nah, too soft/blurred.

Try somewhere in between that and the original.

Assassinator Wrote:

Senseito7 Wrote:

Heartless141 Wrote:

sometimes improvision is not a good idea i suppose.

was going to re...get the render, and use pentool instead.
but goddamn render's source went on a maintenance,

significant improvement., get rid of the pink on the right girls collarbone (left), and yes, a re-render is a good idea if you can.

Nice work Heartless.

Nah, too soft/blurred.

Try somewhere in between that and the original.

Quote:and yes, a re-render is a good idea if you can.

That is win! I like the blurred hair, looks nice IMO. And I agree, get rid of the pink on the bone.

Oh and may I request the render?^^

SkyDX Wrote:Oh and may I request the render?^^

Me too.






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http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/552640/
NSFW by the way, just a little fetish of mine. twins.

and my improvision was supposed to be blur all the hair so the face/eyes can be highlighted. :P