Endless Paradigm

I decided to spend a little more time on this one. How did it come out?
Version 2

i think this is the best ive seen from you..other than the text good job. :3

Chaoticgamer Wrote:i think this is the best ive seen from you..other than the text good job. :3

Thanks. I must admit I struggle with the text. Any suggestions?

for Text, use CLEAN (Segoe UI, Verdana, Trebuchet MS) and in this case, use White and space it slightly out of the top left corner with 'mre' or better 'mr.e' on Bold. Small size too.

Bit too blurry at the bottom, could've done with better lighting (bit too dark - loss of focal)

otherwise its your best yet, keep it up dude.

I made some touch ups. Does the text look better now??? I'm never happy with the text......anyways. Thanks for the comments guys. I'm felling a little more confident now

second one is way better than the first man

I say use the same font as the first one but position the text on top of the hair (at the bottom) next to the face

v2 is gorgeous, nicely done man ^^

Senseito Sakura Wrote:for Text, use CLEAN (Segoe UI, Verdana, Trebuchet MS) and in this case, use White and space it slightly out of the top left corner with 'mre' or better 'mr.e' on Bold. Small size too.

Bit too blurry at the bottom, could've done with better lighting (bit too dark - loss of focal)

otherwise its your best yet, keep it up dude.

Sorry I wouldn't do that text.

diego Wrote:

Senseito Sakura Wrote:for Text, use CLEAN (Segoe UI, Verdana, Trebuchet MS) and in this case, use White and space it slightly out of the top left corner with 'mre' or better 'mr.e' on Bold. Small size too.

Bit too blurry at the bottom, could've done with better lighting (bit too dark - loss of focal)

otherwise its your best yet, keep it up dude.

Sorry I wouldn't do that text.

focus on him, not me - D

its up to him if he wants to try it or not~