Endless Paradigm

wow, so the sotw was going to be based on sound

so i tried looking for someone wearing headphones (anime, real life, whatever) and this was all i could find

so i decided to use my only viable option (but the render was pretty good imo)

and this is what i came out with, it would be helpful if you could tell me what i could change so i have a upper hand in this sotw



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V.3


i pay no attention to depth, blending and flow

bah

the sleeve on her left arm where you put a light is overcontrasted.
Also text on top is strange.
And looks grainy in parts. Also background looks grainy in parts.

Hair is a little oversharpened in the left side. But overall it's a pretty good sig.

I think it looks great. Nice job.