16/04/2007, 06:04 PM
yeah so my rough draft is looking just like an outline i woke up got clean then played god of war II all morning and barely started on my essay this is what i have so far:
General Layout: AXES, Persuasive, 5 Paragraphs.
Intro Layout:
Body Paragraphs Layout:
Closing Paragraph Layout:
Intro-Focus on peoples reaction to the bad news (no planes)
Thesis- Removal of a feature previously featured in the series will decrease the popularity and quality of the video game.
Fist Body Paragraph-
Second Body Paragraph-Why would it affect real-world
Third Body Paragraph-What is positive about the feature
Conclusion Paragraph
please feel free to put in ideas of change some things
General Layout: AXES, Persuasive, 5 Paragraphs.
Intro Layout:
Quote
Explain
Thesis
Summary
Body Paragraphs Layout:
Argument
eXample
Explain
Summary/So What
Closing Paragraph Layout:
Restate Thesis
Re-Summarize Weakest Point
Re-Summarize Average Point
Re-Summarize Strongest Point
Intro-Focus on peoples reaction to the bad news (no planes)
Thesis- Removal of a feature previously featured in the series will decrease the popularity and quality of the video game.
Fist Body Paragraph-
Second Body Paragraph-Why would it affect real-world
Third Body Paragraph-What is positive about the feature
Conclusion Paragraph
please feel free to put in ideas of change some things
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